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Is Technology Making Life Better or Worse (1)
Technology has andeniably (2) transformed our lives, offering both remarkable benefitial (3) and significant drawbacks. In (4) the positive side, technology enhances productivity and efficiency, allowing us to complete tasks more quickly and effectively. *(5) Advancements in medical technology have improved healthcare outcomes, while communication tools like smartphones and social media platforms have connected us globally. However, technology also has its downloads (6). It can lead to decreased face-to-face interaction, contributing to feelings of isolation and loneliness. Additionally, the constant use of digital devices can negatively impacts (7) our physical health, causing issues like eye strain and poor posture. On the other hand (8), while technology brings many advantages, it also present (8) challenges that we must address to ensure a balanced and healthy life. I think technology is very important in education nowadays. (10)
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